Autumn

Autumn

The Autumn leaves fall onto the ground leaving the trees naked. The leaves cover

the ground like a child snuggled into a warm cosy blanket.

The Autumn leaves are bright coloured like a light shining.

The evergreen trees stand out like

snakes scales.

Watch out! Autumn is here.

Hunted

HUNTED

One mysterious night, when the full moon shone, a jungle boy peeked out from behind a bunch of palm trees. The boy could smell a well-cooked chicken which made his tummy rumble. Angrily, the boy went after the chicken. Just as he was about to grab it he fell down a hole. A strange man blinded him. After he started to see again he found himself tied up, upside down. He spotted the chicken again but a few minutes later the strange man came along with a mouth full of chicken and a wish bone in his hand. “This could be your lucky day,” said the man. They snapped the wishbone and they boy got the long side of the wishbone. The fat man walked away until he heard a sudden noise and noticed something wrong. When he turned around the boy had vanished. The fat man started chasing after him like a gorilla. Finally he caught up with the boy and tried to slow him down.

Suddenly the boy met a dead end and the man grabbed hold of him.  The boy looked down and saw a camera and flash. He had an idea. The boy quickly picked up the light and blinded the man and ran away

as quick as lighting. The boy quickly ran through the cage but

the man could not fit and banged straight into the cage and got

knocked out for a while.  

When he woke up he was hanging up, very high in the cage and the people danced and sang.

My First Narrative

The Ancient Island

“Tweet Tweet” the cute little birds sang as I began to wake up.

“Where am I? Wake up,” I screamed at my mum and brother. We were stranded on an Ancient Island with lots of tall trees.

“We need to go and find a camp or build one and find food before

it gets dark but be aware of the possible dangers around

here”.  “Ahh,look there is a white tiger staring at us. Quietly sneak off and climb a tree” mum whispered in our ear.  I quickly snuck off and found a giant tree that had a lot of thick branches. We spent time collecting things and built a camp up in the tree. “It really looks like one of the branches are going to snap and send us crashing to the ground” Samuel added.

Bang! “What was that?”mum asked worrying. “Lets have a look” I replied. It was a storm coming. Let’s get out of here, it’s not safe” suggested Samuel. We decided to build a raft and sail back home. We spent the next hour collecting materials and creating our raft. Finally the raft was built. “Lets go before the storm breaks,” I yelled. Off we sailed and finally we made it back home. I do not want to go back that island again. The End.