Descriptive writing

Kia Ora

Over the last weeks we have been doing descriptive writing. Our criteria was to add a title , have at least 2 paragraphs,15 lines at least 2 similes and 8-9 sentences.

Term 1 Set 8 Weekly revision

Here is my Weekly revision I got 41 % out of 34.I need to work on  my writing as a basic numeral ,my      rounding to the nearest hundred and writing all the factors .

Here is my screenshots.